I can't find it right now, but a few months ago, SEOMOZ did a landing page conversion contest to see which landing pages would convert best. If I remember the winner was 13 printed pages of text. I decided to make one that is more text based.

I would be interested in your suggestions.

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Thanks for your suggestions in advance.

Update** I really do want the advice. I just looked at the post, and it seems to have grabbed the title off the web page and made that the anchor text for the link.
Sorry, I just get sensitive about web spam. When I saw what the forum did with the post, it kind of looked like web spam. It is not. I do want your suggestions and feedback.

Thank you. Ryan