Review for Body Jewelry Site

[nipplecharms1]

Hi gang,

As always, I would appreciate everyone's input, both good and especially critical.

Do not look at the site for anything other than usability. I want to convert more of my visitors to buyers. I believe the eyes here can help me with that.

The site for our non piercing body jewelry is Non Piercing Nipple Jewelry & Body Rings - NippleCharms.com

IMPORTANT: Please do not click on the site if you or your community are offended by some slight nudity (our mouthpiece makes us say that and they charge enough for that advice so we take it.)

I will await your comments either here or via IM if you prefer.

Thanks everyone! I have my cry blanket ready!

Michael

[razsports]

HI,

Over-all a nice web design. That being said, my only suggestion is to design a much better looking logo. It was all red and all the way to the right a picture of a face.

[yoshi8]

What you need is more tits

[Idea Guy]

What you need is more tits

lol.. try to check the links. I guess they have more there...

Anyway, your site is good...

[Chris]

i would emulate this style.

Cameo Lingerie- Sexy Lingerie Costumes Corsets Bustiers in Regular & Plus Size

you have the basic look down. i would spend time refining the look and feel. make it more feminine... more sexy... and yes, more breast - tastefully done, of course (because that is what you are selling). and don't forget, the female breast is great linkbait. do you use models or do you have an image bank you choose from?

it's all about accentuating your product and i don't see enough of it on the front page...

[iany]

On the look and feel, the menu on the left hand column looks untidy with the different cases. A different font would look classier too.

You might want to look at the html as there is something not right with the layout of the header area as it causes the validator to have a fit.
Result for http://www.nipplecharms.com/back-belly-chains.html - W3C Markup Validator
Site looks like it has been made in the WYSIWYG of Dreamweaver too.

I agree that the top banner and logo are lacking in something too.

[brandyace]

the top header box doesn't line up with the page. It's off an inch or 2 on each side. At least on my browser.

great idea for product.

found the site difficult to easily navigate. Too much scrolling to find info.

[nipplecharms1]

Thank you to everyone that responded thus far.

Razsport, new logo. Will work on that once our paper material runs out. suggestions?

i would emulate this style.

Cameo Lingerie- Sexy Lingerie Costumes Corsets Bustiers in Regular & Plus Size

you have the basic look down. i would spend time refining the look and feel. make it more feminine... more sexy... and yes, more breast - tastefully done, of course (because that is what you are selling). and don't forget, the female breast is great linkbait. do you use models or do you have an image bank you choose from?

it's all about accentuating your product and i don't see enough of it on the front page. ..

Thanks Chris. The site that you refer is big bucks. I love it. Wish I could afford that type of site. that would put me into the big leagues. I will try some of your suggestions. Did you say you wanted to take our site on as a test?

On the look and feel, the menu on the left hand column looks untidy with the different cases. A different font would look classier too.

You might want to look at the html as there is something not right with the layout of the header area as it causes the validator to have a fit.
Result for http://www.nipplecharms.com/back-belly-chains.html - W3C Markup Validator
Site looks like it has been made in the WYSIWYG of Dreamweaver too.

I agree that the top banner and logo are lacking in something too.

Iany - It is dreamweaver. Sucks I know but its what I know. We need to work on a better logo.

the top header box doesn't line up with the page. It's off an inch or 2 on each side. At least on my browser.

great idea for product.

found the site difficult to easily navigate. Too much scrolling to find info.

Brandy, which browser and can you be a little more specific on the navigation. I would like to know that so I can fix it.

thanks again all.

Michael

PS suggestions always welcome!!!

[tomhoryn]

Too many borders.
Too many different fonts.
"JaneGuide" animation banner (bottom of page) belongs to 90s’
Too many horizontal rules.
Quick navigation on bottom: too long...

[tomhoryn]

oh, one more thing: don't use red font.