please review

[panther]

If you give me your email address and the location of my link on your site, I'll send you the original illustrator file. You'll need it later if you want to print business cards.

[adedman]

Hi Dustin

Link is at http://workplacehealthandsafety.com/...iewtopic&t=608

If you want any more exposure just let my know.

email address is apdedman@hotmail.com

cheers
Andrew

[grease]

Give your logo some breathing room on the site. Try scaling back the eye shape so it balances better with the text. The eye is left justified, yet the text is center-justified. This creates a visual distraction called 'trapped white space' to the left of the words 'workplace' and 'keeping'. Try left aligning all of your text. The red of your slogan introduces a 4th colour. This breaks the rhythm of the composition. Try using the green colour to tie it all together. Good luck!

[adedman]

something like this

[grease]

Much better. Reduce the eye by 10-20%

[greghart]

Hate to be a stick in the mud, but the eye concept combined with the safety sign does not do it for me at all.

I would try something more font based intead of try to combine two objects which in my opinon dont fit!

Cheers

[adedman]

i am getting all different views, can some come up with a good design.

when i thinks its good logo someone else has a different view

[panther]

I think your logo is fine. All that grease is saying is the eye being cut off looks tacky. If the eys was reduced to fit in the white box with some room to breath it would look much better. The new font looks ok as well. Taking the red out of the slogan helped.
Good Luck!

[adedman]

I seen to like the text centred, does it look better then justified left
and i reduced the size as welll

[webhost1]

Make the eye a full eye. Don't cut off the eye parts. The part that is under the eye is cut off. See if you can show that part of the eye.