www.lawman-supply.com - newbie

[Copperbutch]

Hi Yawl,
From the south, Florida that is. Have just entered into the world of creating a website and published it. I am a novice at best and would like some suggestions if willing. The address: www.lawman-supply.com
I have a about page that will tell you a little more about me.
Thanx
Copperbutch

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[ArnoldoT]

Hello there, NE Florida here...

Man you just got a new customer!
Love the items you have for sale...

Anyway, lets talk about your website
if that is your first website, good job!

Im not a webpro, im giving my point of view as a web-user, there is no pun intended on these comments, im also creating websites and there is always something i missed, so this is only to let you know how you can improve your skills.

your websire is basiclly good, but... it need some work, you see, people who usually uses the internet to BUY stuff are very picky, the site needs to look professional so the customers dont think about a scam page or so, you do need to work on the layout of the page.

the badge-logo is a good idea, but it needs some work too
the navigation bar(s) are quite HUGE! put all your items on a "Products" link, and then add the sub-links

the index (main page) is quite long, you might want to consider to break it down a bit, lets say three pages...

index (welcome to my website/// bla bla bla)
about us (we are a company... bla bla)
Conact us (contact info)

or you can just use some anchor tags, if you want to

i would also center the images on the page (the gallery, products)


on your...

POLICIES PAGE
Dont use the highlight that way, it looks chessy... just use the clasic "NOTE:..." in bold

FORMS PAGE
Onlineform.html file is not on your server

NEWS PAGE
you have a black background, and some black text also in this page "This website is at the final stage.." Search engines wont like this, and you might get banned from their listings... use a different color for the text

ORGANIZERS PAGE
Put all of them in the same page, you just one of each style so its not necesary to have different pages for each (unles you are planning to add more styles soon)

SPECIALS PAGE
this is an important page, because everyone wants specials... but, you need to let your customers know what they are going to be taken to Ebay

and... at last but not least
change the red font type... doesnt look good at all
"OUR MOTTO: Service with .. Integrity and Respect .. Demanding Quality!"
a different font would make a big difference, for good


for someone just learning english i wrote quite a whole story... this is lifetime!

good luck, let me know if i can be of any help

ArnoldoT