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    Check this logo please.

    I’m starting a BMX brand and shop with a friend in Perú. We picked up PRIMATE as the company name and I designed this logo.
    We want to show a dark and a little mystical concept.
    What do you thing about it?logo
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    Your logo is simple but good. There should be another option for us to choose the better.

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    Simple and nice......
    Looks good....

    work on it more and you could come up with something with more mystical touch.

    Liked the font you have used.

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    does the primate (logo) have to be angry looking? anger typically repels people...

    rick

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    My advice would be to try out a few different concepts. We can help you better if we have a variety to look at.

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    I would try a few different concepts, too. On first glance I saw the primate then it was like one of those pictures in a Psychology test where you can see a different image. They eyes look like two birds facing each other so visually I keep going back and forth between the primate and the birds.

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    Yeah I realized that there were two birds after posting it. LOL.
    Ia was making some changes. Thanks for the feedback.

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    I didnt like it. Is that 2 birds drinking out of a paper cup?
    For me it isnt clear enough or memorable. Ask me to draw it from memory, and I would have no idea in 1 hour. Simpler designs work better IMO

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    Quote Originally Posted by rainman View Post
    I didnt like it. Is that 2 birds drinking out of a paper cup?
    That made me laugh when I re-looked at the logo I see what rainman is saying. Maybe go for something a bit simpler in design?

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    Quote Originally Posted by rainman View Post
    I didnt like it. Is that 2 birds drinking out of a paper cup?
    For me it isnt clear enough or memorable. Ask me to draw it from memory, and I would have no idea in 1 hour. Simpler designs work better IMO
    I agree. I did not find it simple at all, and I found it confusing. The name is Primate, but I also saw birds. There is a disconnect. A simplified gorilla head would have been consistent (I am not saying that is what it should be - just the first thing that came to my mind).

    I also agree with several others that it is easier to comment when presented with several options.

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