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[creatip]

Hey guys,

We are two partners developing DiCheetal, the fastest cloud animal™. None of us is a graphic artist, we can be creative and code, but odds are our stuff won’t make it in an Art Museum. Still we did the graphics for our app and we’d appreciate some input from the pros.

Here are the pages where we tried our artistic hand:

dicheetal.com
dicheetal.com/dcweb (just the screenie is at dicheetal.com/images/627.jpg )

627.jpg

You can even take DiCheetal for a spin (nothing to download in the web version) to see how it looks when you maximize the 3 minimized forms. Nothing to lose: it’s the fastest, smartest and best organized way of searching the net.

[creatip]

DiCheetal is a 100% original concept with no competition on the market, and I would guess that some original looks (vs. some overused "prebuilt template") would make sense. Except for the central logo the other 4 pics tell a story, from south-east clockwise to north-east; I doubt that there's a template out there that would spell that story that way while making sense in the context.

[Keimos]

Hi Creatip,

Simple and fast, although some basics

The logo changes throughout the site, I prefer the more colourful one
The links bar under the log is lost when you go to web version
There is no return link to the site from the forum
There is some work that could be done to make it prettier but that would be preference. The simplicity works for me

Hope that helps and thanks for reviewing my site
Keith

[creatip]

Thanks Keith. I'll see you around or, why not, on the red carpet ..

[Trazzy]

Hi! I had a look at the website and wanted to write a review, but I'm not sure what to write. There is no design, just a page, text. And you have to read in details before you understand something. An average user won't get what's this and what you're offering. You make it more simple so the info is clear for everyone.

[creatip]

Hi! I had a look at the website and wanted to write a review, but I'm not sure what to write. There is no design, just a page, text. And you have to read in details before you understand something. An average user won't get what's this and what you're offering. You make it more simple so the info is clear for everyone.

you say "There is no design, just a page, text" and I dunno what to make of it. On the Desktop Edition Help* (the Web Edition Help is under construction) there are 8 pictures + explanatory text, it's not "just a page, text"

* dicheetal.com/help.html

[Design Brasilia]

More attention to detail as the choice of font that will be very good!