Review my Site Logo

[jeracoo]

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Gday Mates, my names Matt, first time logo maker here. I'm looking for a review for my logo that I've made in photoshop. It's for a travel blog I've started.

Any tips or help would be greatly appreciated, wish I could make the logo appear larger here.

Cheers

[sugardrone]

1. Use color
2. The logo figure, the man, should not be that detailed, use a more simplistic figure
3. "Travelling the world on a budget" should not be cursive, use arial or helvetica for that, none of the text should be cursive
4. Make the man a central part of the logo.
5. Try to make the letters invoke moving or travel

[weegillis]

One can hardly call public domain line art a logo. Perhaps a secondary 'icon' denoting travelling on a shoestring, but as a logo it doesn't work.

In order for typography to be considered part of a logo it must be incorporated right into the body, not alongside as it would appear on a business card. For this one, I say, back to the drawing board.

One could add... The figure in your logo ought to be walking into the picture, not out of it.

[jeracoo]

Stingy 3 show.jpg

Ok, I've made up a bit better logo

[Sujan]

I prefer your 1st one. I also prefer the black & white combination. But you have to design your website according to the color scheme of your logo.

[Dots]

Yuo can try this site is good for what you want cooltext.com

As for my i like 1st

[Clicken]

The second one has better composition. It leads the eye across the business name and pulls everything together. However the image behind the S isn't exactly quite right. It appears more like an ink blob that requires too much study to figure out what it is. It should be instantly recognizable as a man figure.

[Earl]

Not really a logo more like a icon, I would suggest using color , unique art, nice font, and keep it clean and simple.

[rickanderson]

Stingy 3 show.jpg

Ok, I've made up a bit better logo

jeracoo

this one is more clever than the first, well done. i found the word "travelling" to be a bit redundant after having just read: "traveler".....also....you're missing an "l" in "Traveler" since it's suppose to be "Traveller" .... maybe "seeing" could be used in place of "travelling" so as not to be redundant

rick