Please review my logo.

[Tsovv]

This is a logo I have created for a shop at my university which mainly sells stationery and lecture notes. I would like to know what you think about it.
campus.jpg.jpg
Thanks.

[Clicken]

It looks good, the CAMPUS lettering is unique.


I was just wondering how it would look with the SHOP text the same height as the CAMPUS text to square it off?

[rainman]

not sure about the'A' in campus. It made me look twice to confirm in my mind it was an A and I don't think that should happen

[jim60723]

I was just wondering how it would look with the SHOP text the same height as the CAMPUS text to square it off?

I agree with Clicken. And also you may try stylizing The "SHOP" a-bit or maybe using a different shade. Play with different versions of it.

[GeoffreyYu7]

As an above poster suggested, definitely try making "shop" the same size as "campus." Also, not sure if it's my browser, but it looks a little low res. Great looking logo overall.

[martink]

All subjective, but personally I agree about the "a". Like, how small will the logo be used (when used on business cards or envelopes for instance)? When printed or online would it be as small as it renders here on this forum? If so, it's tricky to read. I know what it says because you told us. Will it always be ovious? Things to consider.