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Thread: Website upgraded. we need suggestions..

  1. #1
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    Website upgraded. we need suggestions..

    Hi,
    We've just upgraded our website: easytraffic.biz
    (I removed the http to not spam)

    English is not my native language, so I'd love to hear primarily what you think of the text on the home page, on the "How It Works" page and on the "Buy Website Traffic" page

    Many thanks....

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    nice but you should be concern about the home page.

    you create separate page about
    "What our customers are saying"

    I do not like the way you are showing it on the home page.

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    You should consider to use the layout of the main page also for all subpages.
    I would put the "Buy…"-buttons in the upper part, above the scrolling line.
    The graphics with the upgoing line is good, but the background is unattractive. Why did you cut the lady's hair on top? She should be complete.

    Check your code on validator.w3.org, there are several html errors.

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    Thank you!
    I going to change the image to make it more attractive.

    Can you explain more
    1- "You should consider to use the layout of the main page also for all subpages" ?
    2- "above the scrolling line" ?

    What do you think of the text in the three pages? Is it well written

    Thanks...

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    A few things. One, your homepage is clean but a little boring. You definitely want to add bolder graphics. The customer testimonial slideshow at the bottom won't appeal to English-speaking customers. Why? Because most of the testimonials are written in bad or awkward English. If I were a potential customer, I would wonder why a site that's supposedly successful can't show a few good English-speaking references that can vouch for them. Just something to think about.
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