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    Lightbulb Please be kind and review my website !!!

    I have just completed this website. Please help me make it better. Website address: jalurja.rudra.com.np

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    >>>Keep in mind that I am not a pro. I am reviewing this as someone who has just found the site.<<<

    -Home Page:
    It took me a few seconds to process the main pic's top left-hand corner. You may want to re-do that somehow.

    Lack of electricity is a major constraint to economic development and poverty alleviation. Currently, Nepal is harnessing less than 1 percent of its potential hydropower energy and the country depends on biofuels — mainly wood — to meet its energy needs. This has serious consequences for Nepal’s environment as the consumption of wood for fuel accelerates deforestation and soil erosion.
    - USAID
    If this is a quote, it needs quotations. Linking to the original document is a good idea as well. People needing more information on this subject will generally like to read this quote in the original context in which it was written.
    Citing the shockingly high ration of feasibile energy(Hydropower - 44,000 MW) to installed capacity(Generation - 611 MW), the need for Small Hydro Electric Proejcts(SHEP) cannot be emphasized more.
    This needs to be re-worded.
    "The need for Small Hydro-Electric Projects(SHEP) has never been greater when you compare the high ration of feasible energy( ... ) to the installed capacity( ... )." Just a thought. The way it is written does not flow very well.

    Overall, I like the theme of the site, and the fact that you have personalized the company by providing a bio page. The physical address is a plus.

    However, you may need to have someone proofread the copy on the pages to make sure it flows and sounds professional. You need to gear your copy for laymen. There is tech-speak in there that may be hard to understand for some people that find the site.

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