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    Please review my site!!

    Hi friends,

    Please review my site cornellmobile.com. It is a renowned diagnostic services company. Cornell diagnostic services mission is to provide quality ultrasound services with an assurance patient are treated with respect and courtesy. Please review for design, layout and give me some honest feedback. Suggestions are also welcome.

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    Please keep in mind before you read on that I've kept in mind that you're probably not a web designer and it seems you may not have full control of your website. if that is the case, let the positive criticism by myself and others who respond be passed to your developer and try to get some of the suggestions changed/edited.

    Well your home page validated, that was good news off the hop for me.

    Graphically: I'd make the small arrow under the red links at the top a horizontal bar rather than the arrow - I was unnecessarily distracted by that for some reason. Your website color scheme is slightly out of order. You have at least more than 5 different colors/hues.

    I love a good footer: your footer looks dead and dry. Only because the color of the text is almost the same as the background - it doesn't stand out and say WOW. I'd change the color of the text to white. There is no reason to not make that part of your site nice on the eyes for visitors. Contrary to popular belief, people do go to the footer all the time to find links to pages like contact, about, blog, Facebook, Twitter...

    In your footer use the following code for the copyright:

    Code:
    &#169;<?php echo date('Y', time()); ?> Cornel Diagonestic - All Rights Reserved.
    ...and remove the link to the site designer. That link does you no good and more harm than anything - for now.

    The header is rather large. I'm not sure how effective that is towards any of your marketing/conversion goals.

    Your testimonials button link didn't give me a good or positive user experience. I was expecting to see a list of testimonials but instead found your form to submit one. That can be rectified by simply adding "Add Testimonial" to the button.

    From an SEO/user experience perspective I would suggest that you add links within the copy of your articles to other pages within your site if the keywords are there. If the keywords of one article aren't on the page of another, simply edit a few of the articles with some copy which will enable you to create the link with the right anchor text.

    Anchor Text is the text that the user clicks on - that should be a keyword.

    Have a great day!

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    The design is good..

    Just like I mentioned about your other site.. having that huge header that doesn't change on any of the pages is a tad annoying. You need to get rid of that on every single page, or at least change it up to help with your sales messages.

    Also, your using tables on all of your designs I assume from the past 2 sites I've reviewed. Learn CSS and start using it. You'll be so happy you did. And your clients SEO will be glad you did too. It may seem a bit combersom at first, but once you get the hang of it you'll love it.

    The pagargrpah form on your pages doesn't have any spaces.. I see where the pagagraphs are supposed to be, but it looks weird. The easier you make things to read, the happier your visitors will be..

    The log in font color looks out of place. I know it's from the blue on the site, but you should make it consistant with the other link colors.. white.. it would look good on that background.

    The logo is a tad blurry..

    For your header image on the index page.. have you taken a look at using a jQuery scroller? you can promote sales messages with multiple images and text and make the site more interactive.

    And again.. LEARN CSS and start using it.. Tables are out.. and you can do so much more with your designs with CSS.. from what I can see you've got a great eye for aesthetics.. and CSS will allow you to do SO much more with your designs.

    The only thing tables are really used for as far as design goes is email newsletters.

    Thats all for me.
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    The "our news" has no info but there's a 'read more' link. You could add some info before putting up the 'read more' link.
    There's too much empty space in the footer.
    There is a color difference in the 'login' and 'register' background.
    A favicon would do good.

    All the best!

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    Your site is alright but it seems a little too static and the doctor graphic is really generic-looking. It looks like it needs articles or something posted to it or tech updates just so that it doesn't look like a stale static page that's never updated.

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