www.krystal-air.com

[Lando]

Well, have at it! LOL

Always difficult to catch the mistakes when you're doing it yourself, so would appreciate the comments. Also, I know I'm not using the most recent syntax. etc., but... time isn't always there., as I've learned SEO, etc. by the 'seat of my pants'.

I seem to rank fairly high on the SE's ( most at least) especially on important keywords, but any further suggestions would be appreciated.
Again, it's www.krystal-air.com

Thanks in advance!
Lando

[Brittany]

Hey Lando,

Just a few suggestions here...

Your design is okay, except for the fact that your visitors have to scroll pretty far down to view all of the page content. Perhaps, instead of trying to squeeze everything onto one page, you could divide each section up into separate pages. Or, if possible, could you put your advertisements/sponsers in a separate section of the site, since they seem to be taking up most of the room at the bottom of the pages anyway, and it's hard to differentiate between your actual content and your advertisements sometimes.

Also on your index page, you could easily link to the rest of your site by making the blue text clickable (where it says "Pet Odors," "Household Odors," etc).

Brittany

[hannahkabana]

hello,

Could do with a bit more organisation of all your information. Actually a lot of sites i've seen seem to have this problem and it's a bit off putting to me because it makes me confused.

Also a little bit more colour (i can say that to myself considering my site's only black and white!). You have your contact details everywhere which is an important thing.

Hannah
http://www.luxury-leather-goods.com