steveteva
03-13-2004, 09:12 PM
Hi
I ve publish a free ebook that will show you step by step how to create atalking website .
Main homepage :
http://www.tools4webmaster.com/audiowebpage/
You can download here (.zip file):
http://www.tools4webmaster.com/bonus/audiowebpage.zip
voodooboy
03-22-2004, 10:44 AM
While you have a nice tutorial, speaking as a professional in the industry and intending no disrespect, you write like a young (13-14 yr old) teenager.
To clarify my comment; you may very-well be that age; and I have nothing against young people, nor do I think young people lack the ability to create quality tutorials. The point I am making is that as a tutorial writer, you need to understand that your market is not teenagers. Your market is from 12-46+ and if you would like to start marketing your tutorials in the future for profit, then you need to write copy that will speak appropriately to that entire age range.
The tutorial is great. The information is well laid out; the screen shots are useful and placed appropriately. Over-all it has the appearance of a professionally created tutorial. It is the copy that really throws me off.
If you toned down the sarcasm, and added a professional tone to the copy, you would have a top notch tutorial.
Great job overall.