Logical Logos

[icb01co2]

http://www.clarendenskys.co.uk/logical.jpg

http://www.clarendenskys.co.uk/logical%20copy.jpg


What do you all think of this effort?

[egtrix designs]

Hello,
Very good effort but I think that it needs some refining. The O letter needs to be re positioned to the left a little bit or you can decrease the shadow size a little bit, also I think that if you change the color of the word (positioning) to a darker green degree, it will look better and will be more readable and clear.
Thanks and well done

[icb01co2]

Thanks, to be honest the more i look at it the more i dislike it, i think i'll play around with another design. i'm liking the green/balck combination though.

[icb01co2]

What do you think better? worse?

http://www.clarendenskys.co.uk/logicalb.jpg