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LiviLou

10-09-2003, 10:54 AM

This is the first and only site I have ever had! Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! As soon as I can get to a scanner, I plan to post some of the letters that I have gotten from the places I send to just to let people know that this is not a con. Please tell me what you think about it!!!!!!

BE HONEST!!!!!!

To get there

http://webpages.charter.net/onepageatatime/

Thank you in advance.

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KarenH

10-09-2003, 01:33 PM

You've got a great start on your site - Very Nice!

I think that it could use a more interesting page layout, maybe add some more photos and a Logo wouldn't be a bad idea either.

Your navigation could use some help as well. Your site was kind-of hard to navigate through since you only have three main links.

Let me know if you need any help!
-Karen

janeth

10-09-2003, 04:11 PM

It sounds like a great service but I would add a lot more text about yourself and business on the home page design a really nice logo and the picture on the home page is fuzzy.

LiviLou

10-10-2003, 08:55 AM

I'm trying to correct that about the pics. At the time, that was all I could find. My sister has some pics of Austin (the one who has cancer) and is going to send me some to put on my page. I wasn't sure if I should put info about me or not, so I appreciate you telling me this. I answers my question. Any more comments are appreciated!

KarenH

10-15-2003, 12:56 PM

This is the first and only site I have ever had! Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! As soon as I can get to a scanner, I plan to post some of the letters that I have gotten from the places I send to just to let people know that this is not a con. Please tell me what you think about it!!!!!!

BE HONEST!!!!!!

To get there

http://webpages.charter.net/onepageatatime/

Thank you in advance.

<Mod edit to comply with Site Review Rule #1 (http://www.webproworld.com/viewtopic.php?t=47) - Syren>

This site is now sporting a new look. Altered Impressions recently donated the re-design of Olivia's entire site.

LiviLou

10-15-2003, 01:17 PM

It really is worth going to. Karen really did a wonderful job on it. Check it out.

LiviLou

10-18-2003, 03:05 AM

I just put an extra page that has letter from some of the agencies I send to, do you think that will help get the message that this is not a con? I also got a children's hospital to let me put a link to them on my page. Will that help or hurt?

LiviLou

10-27-2003, 08:17 AM

Site completely redone since this started. Give comments, suggestion, anything helpful.