New Homepage Needs Help - www.alteredimpressions.com

[KarenH]

Please help review my new homepage at www.alteredimpressions.com

Hey, even us "professionals" need help!

Thanks
Karen


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[vwebworld]

Karen... great job!

I might "word" some things a little differently,
like "Improve your website!" instead of "I will
help you...."

And the "Before and after shots of your site?"
(with a question mark) is a little confusing.
I think your point is not having before and after shots,
but is "Free website makeovers". I'd
include a link in that text to the makeover page
(not just on the picture).

Also add an alt image tag to the makeover pic.

My only other point is the pics that you use
on the site... are nice and "blend in" with
your site... but for me, they don't "go" with
the site. My thought would be to use elements
of your main logo throughout the site instead. Like
the "people" figure and/or the curve.

~Roland

[KarenH]

I did follow your suggestions and I agreed with them all. I spent some time trying to replace the images, but decided things looked best without. Thanks Again.