Logo Review - www.thinkingparent.com

[gary1245]

Hi,
I would appreciate any thoughts or feedback on our logo at https://thinkingparent.com.

[designhead]

I like it but I think you can do a few things to improve it.
The thinking bubble over their heads looks a little too much like a dark cloud. There should be at least 2 little circles off of each parents head to make it more like their thoughts. And maybe the bubble could just have a heart in it (if that's not too corny) or at least be lighter so that they don't look depressed.
Also, You could lengthen/enlarge "Thinking Parent" so that it fills the space a little better. Then maybe the little girl might move to the right, mom to the left, so that they fit the outline of the type nicely.

[gary1245]

I appreciate the comments; I think I understand / visualize why you made them.

I checked out your site and I like your cards. You do nice work.
Gary

[designhead]

Thank you Gary. I appreciate your compliments on my work.