Book Online Vacation Rentals

[ofoglada]

Not too new but one of my first corporate logo's. Thoughts?

http://www.bookonlinevacationrentals.com/images/bo_vacation_rentals_logo.gif

Used for:
http://www.bookonlinevacationrentals.com/

[grease]

I like your visual, but I am viewing it more as an illustration or decorative element. Try to bring your visual and text a little tighter to make the boundaries of the logo a little stronger. This will create a stronger impact and help people remember the brand image.

[matauri]

I like the visual also, but also dont think it ties together.

This is just my opinion....

1. Swap the 2 birds up top over. Have the larger on the right.
2. Shorten the horizon line on both sides, but shorter on right hand side.
3. Line the text up in block form to the right of the sun, and get rid of the script font & use a plainer black one.

Good luck :-)


Cindy