Please rate my logo

[Passarinho]

Hey, i want to show you our new logo. We have school tv, which name is TvSempa. We make some video and upload it to youtube. I want to know, what do you think about it.

Thank you for marks ;)
You can see this logo there: tegess.com.pl/Grafiki/SEMPA12.png thanks;)

[Sujan]

Your logo is not impressive at all. Sorry to say that but please try with some other idea.

[GeoffreyYu7]

I like the style the words are written in, but not much else. Get rid of everything besides the word and you'll have a passable logo. Once you have a base to work with, try modifying it in different ways to see what works best. Hope that helps.

[Passarinho]

You should see to this link, which i sent, not to this "Attached Thumbnails", because this is png and the background is transparent and it should be white. I think this logo should be connected with tv. Not only text. I like google tv logo and i think our logo should be like google tv logo.

[deepsand]

I've tried to view it in situ, but cannot find it on any of your site's pages.

Where can it be viewed in its proper context?

[Passarinho]

I can not give you link, because there are some stiupid limits. tegess.com.pl/Grafiki/SEMPA12.png if you paste it in your browser, i think it could work. If not, please ad
d http. :)

[deepsand]

I'm not talking about looking at the PNG file itself, but rather a page or pages on which the logo is displayed, so as to see how well it fits with the surrounding content.

[Passarinho]

Oh, ok, I haven't got this logo on our website, because it is only idea for new logo. But yesterday i made our new intro for videos and you can see it on youtube. The link is:
youtube.com/watch?v=MG01tsCsxTU&list=UUOVtQ8E1Ow4jr0GxD80dvAw&index=1&feature=plcp

[deepsand]

That's just what I was looking for; and, what others should be viewing, particularly given that it's not a still, but animated.

As presented on YouTube, it looks fine to me with the exception of the duration of the words themselves; those I'd let linger just a bit longer.

[Passarinho]

ok, you have right ;) Thanks deepsand ;)

[Talks_44]

I'd agree with deepsand about how long the words show up.. I would also suggest that instead of just having the words stop, having them fade out like they fade in.

[deepsand]

Good catch. I'd meant, and forgot, to mention that the abrupt disappearance of the words, following by a protracted period of white space, gave the impression that there was more to follow.

[Slag Bait]

But should the logo move?

Anything that moves on the website pulls our attention towards that area of the site. Would it be better to have your website visitors focused on another area of your site other than your logo?

[deepsand]

But should the logo move?
It's an intro screen for videos.

[Slag Bait]

It's an intro screen for videos.

Doesn't matter, if it's a logo and is going to be on a website the fact that it will be moving would draw your attention away from the rest of the message of the site.

[williamc]

Uhh, the animated logo is for 'videos', not webpages, as far as he has said thus far.

[deepsand]

Doesn't matter, if it's a logo and is going to be on a website the fact that it will be moving would draw your attention away from the rest of the message of the site.
Did you actually look at his YouTube mock-up?

[Slag Bait]

Did you actually look at his YouTube mock-up?

Yes I did, I would not comment on it had I not of looked at it.


Uhh, the animated logo is for 'videos', not webpages, as far as he has said thus far.

Sorry I was thinking about a website.