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coventryg
10-29-2003, 05:42 AM
http://www.concise.co.uk/concise.gif
Concise Group Ltd, based in the City of London, is a software development organisation providing J2EE technology based solutions to the financial services sector.
careers1
10-29-2003, 09:10 PM
Hi,
The logo looks good and clean however the first impression that came to mind was for the globe to be one of the letters in concise (preferrably the "o") ;-)
I also feel that the name concise can be in a light grey format which would help the globe to stand out even more. The letters should be a bit more on the corporate side i think - perhaps thick letters with with more of a box style with slightly curved edges to provide a more solid and certain appearance.
Also more food for thought is to make the letters in a deep blue and allow the globe to be light grey for variation. In this case the globe should have an appearance of being embossed rather than a 3 dimensional design.
Continued success!
grease
10-29-2003, 09:32 PM
I agree,
The globe would look better as the letter 'O'. Globes are highly overused, and this movement would make the logo as a whole a little more unique. I don't think an emboss would help - in fact I think it would add unecessary detail without adding value.
Grease
Your logo communicates "serious", "new technologies", "international" to me, which is very close to your expertise. But I can't perceive the "financial" aspect. The more close a design of a logo comes to the "expertise" the more credible it will be and the more uniqueness it will have. So my suggestion is, try to add a "financial" aspect.
All in all it is almost done.
Good luck!
mikesed
11-08-2003, 04:15 AM
I'm not so sure I agree about including the globe into the O. However, I do think you need to change the font for the title. It looks just a little too arty! I think you are trying to get across "We are serious and professional". Maybe just greying it down as another reviewer suggested would work.
freelancemom
11-09-2003, 08:41 AM
Love the name!
I agree that globes are used quite a bit in logos. Though yours is particularly attractive and I think it can really work.
Having two grey tones - one for the globe and the other for the font seems boring. But I think if you try it you might find it really lends a professional touch to the logo.
It wouldn't hurt to try the globe as the o idea. I'd love to see your revamps. I think you are on to something nice here :)
Lori