Dear All,

Last time you gave me very good suggestions, how to make my website better. Now I finished new website, which is based on your comments.

Please check it and tell me your point of view.

www.geocities.com/tj_mobiles/home.html

Thank you in advance.

Best regards
landofsmile / Jane

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the first thing that struck me is :


Our prices do not include delivery charges!
We don't send free samples!

which is very negative for thing to put in the prime bit of screen you have it at. try to focus more on the positve things you can do for people, not what you dont do.

and i think all the animations are a bit over the top.

good luck.

ben

Dear Ben,

Thanks for your comments. I'll think about it.

Best regards
landofsmile