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Old 04-29-2004, 05:14 PM
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Default www.SimplyFertility.com

http://www.SimplyFertility.com

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Old 05-02-2004, 07:48 AM
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Default Re: www.SimplyFertility.com

Tested in IE6 56k modem 800x600. Loads reasonably fast. Too wide for 800x600. A Google PageRank of 0/10 suggest the site needs more links to it. Otherwise, a nice design. Good luck with it.

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Old 05-02-2004, 07:20 PM
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i like the site loads fast all works nice lay out

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Old 05-02-2004, 08:53 PM
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The first two things I see are you trying to get my information you want me to create an account and you have big credit cards on the right saying you want my money.

I think the credit card information should be small and at the bottom of the page or not at all. The first text on the page should be what you can do for me not for me to give you my information.

How would you feel if you walked in a store and the sells man walked up to you and said I need you to feel this out.


I tried to inlarge the product on this page http://www.simplyfertility.com/ all I got was a big page with the same little picture.

But the site is nice looking.
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Old 05-03-2004, 02:07 AM
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I have to agree with the other comments wait to ask for info.

To me the page seems off balance. Left should be more dominant than right or the page should be even.

The only other thought is that maybe some information on the products what types of things can, should, or should not be used together or links to sites with fertility or contraceptive education would be of great assistance.
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