I would greatly appreciate comments and suggestions on my web site and related pages. I will be happy to provide reciprocal reviews and comments. Please direct reviews and comments to Barry Rice at seo@outofthefog.com.

Thank you very much in advance.

Tested in IE6 56k modem 800x600. Seems to take a while to load. Too much information to take in the the main page - needs splitting up into smaller pages. Underlining text to highlight makes it look like a link which is confusing - better to use colour. Otherwise, a good solid design. Good luck with it.

Nick

I call this type layout the direct response guru layout. Long form, testimonials, sell sell sell.

Blue, while a good color for print letters, runs against standard web practice. You may want to use some other markup for emphasis.

On the 'net people want some sort of information. If the keywords are right, people have already identified themselves as wanting the abundance, career satisfaction, and so on. You may want to move something about what the product actually is near the top, like the star bulleted list.

I would sit people down in front of the site and observe them. Get them talking and listed to what they say. Try to take comments with a designer's eye as to what that means for layout, ordering, navigation.