Hi everyone,

My website is quite new, but I would like people's opinion on it.

I have made all of the articles search engine optimised for the relevant keywords for google.

I'm wondering if it reads well.

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Stephen Warren
Creater and webmaster of http://www.makeagreatsite.com
And
http://www.runescape-tip.com

Hi there:

First of all congratulations for one step in wright direction. Having a website is a must.

Now, I think the site lacks of content. The first page doesn't atract me to want to learn more about you and why I want to learn marketing and business from you. It's to vague.

For a small site like yours the site map is more confusing than helping.

I think you should have an about me section, case studies with your success in the marketing field, your services if you offer any, are your articles free?. Bottom line you need to sit and write down more information.

The color scheme, it's not working for me. You have to stick with a color palette that inspire trust but at the same time estimulate your visitors to take action. So that way content and colors will reinforce your message.

Again, here are my 2cents. I hope my comments will help you to atract the kind of visitors you want to have.

Good luck!

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http://www.jpimall.com
Your portal site to everything but the kitchen sink!

So how should i construct a better site map then?

I pretty much only created it to make it easier for search engine spiders to index my site.

If people want to navigate the website it would be much easier for them to use the navigation bar at the side.

So you think I should do an about me page as well?
I owuld lik to, but I'm an 18 year old student, I wouldn't want this fact to go against me.

I have the knowledge, I have the skill and I have the ability, but because I'm 18, some people may lose faith.

What do you think?

Yes my articles are free at the moment. I'm using them to get good positions in the search engines.

I don't provide any services yet, but I will be bringing out my own products and services soon.

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Stephen Warren
Creater and webmaster of http://www.makeagreatsite.com
And
http://www.runescape-tip.com