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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 04-21-2004, 11:12 PM
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Please review my website which can be found at:

www.1234pens.com

Also my new eflyer:

http://www.1234pens.com/flyer_ariel.htm

Thanks in advance - anyone who wants me to review there site let me know i will love to help out.

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Old 05-09-2004, 06:20 AM
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The site is pretty clear and tidy in it's layout.

I liked the use of the orange balck & white colour sheme, but I wonder if a "background" colour (say a paler orange or grey) either side of the centred content might make the page content stadn out more effectively.

An odd thing I noticed is that the image on your contact us page is saved as a bmp file. It is much bigger in kb than a jpg would be and tool quite a bit to download on my screen... and I have broadband!

I also noticed the links at the bottom of the page went to a serif font whereas most of the age was in arial/verdana (which I personally find easie to read on web pages).

Also those links may benefit from being sorted alphabetically and/or in columns.
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Old 05-09-2004, 04:31 PM
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Nice, elegant site (and lovely products!).

You might want to think about the loading speed of your homepage in particular.

I couldn't find any information on delivery costs. As someone who regularly buys on line, this is one of the first things I look for and find it off putting not to know all the costs up front.

On the contact us page, there's rather a large gap between the top message and the actual contact details. It only occured to me to scroll down at the last moment.

Tiny points. Keep up the good work.

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