[url] http://www.skinofyours.com/ebayindex.html

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Would love some comments on my site

thnaks

Wendel
www.west47thstreet.com

Wendel,

I think you've got a good start. But here's what I noticed immediately: 1, you have a _ton_ of white space, blank areas - not used to convey information and exacerbated by some text that is enlarged and double or triple spaced (I always have to remind myself, just because I can do it doesn't mean I should do it). 2, you've provided medical terms for germs we all may know as other names (staph infection, etc). You should go with the education portion and give a dictionary type entry for each, provide pronounciation, definitions, and what you can do about it. 3, if anything below the first screenful of text is important, move it. Most will never scroll down.

Hope this is helpful,

Cheers,

Mark

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You need a logo and a header.

Bring the nav. under the header

Shorten the home page get rid of all the long lines of short sentences.

Have one or two pictures of your product on the home page no more.

Add some good text to the home page.

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