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and hope to get your suggestion.

Why do you keep reproducing the word professional on the top left? Kinda makes it look spammy. Apart from that u are ok and the page loads sufficiently fast.

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I suggest you have a native English speaker look over the text. For example, it's "nobility", not nobleness. I'm not sure what "Let the little crystal perfume bottle loading all pulchritude of you" means, but perhaps "Let this little crystal bottle enhance your sensuality" might be better. "An utensil , a decorations, an artwork" should be "A utensil, a decoration, an artwork"

Your words are very poetic, just not always grammatical.

Hope this helps

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Thanks.
Thank you give me a good suggestion.Don't laugh me,I have deccided to teach myself English.My poor English looking forward to your help.

Site Design is cool. The loading time is very slow. The current Loading time is 50 seconds on 28 K modem. it should be some what 14 - 20 seconds.
The title of your page holds too many characters whcih is more then the limit i.e 80 you have around 100 characters. This will harm while submiting in search engines. Rest, as others mentioned, Some Text and Spelling mistakes.

Good Luck

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