Hello,

If you've ever started a web site, gotten part way through it, then suddenly couldn't seem to get your thoughts together to make it turn out "just the way you wanted" ... that's where I'm at. (Brain fart)

The following link is to my new "proposed" home page that I was liking but have been sitting on for a few days trying to get my act together. If ya'll could take a peak and offer some ideas, I'd humbly ppreciate it. It needs something but I just can't put my finger on it ; - )
I'm also interested in load times for dialup users.
Note: None of the links are active.

http://www.excelontheweb.com/indextest.asp

Thank you in advance,

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Hello,
I like the background and the colors you are using.
Maybe the [read more] and [view demo] should be either graphical buttons, spaced in closer together, or try using something different
.:read more:. .:view demo:.

The brackets look too big for the text somehow...

The navigation on the bottom you can probably just make two lines centered like you have and just remove the "Main Navigation" and Shopping Navigation" descriptions
I also might keep the same order of the links on the bottom as you have at your main navigation.

Otherwise all looks well!

.Danielle.

Thanks for looking and you're right, the brackets were too big. I've scaled them down for now until I can think of how I want to create images to replace them.
One thing I originally forgot to ask was this is a new logo for me (my company) and it's suppose to represent the name and meaning as "Excel on the web", meaning "our customers excel ... when they use our services.
Does it strike you guys/gals that way?
Do you like the logo or not?