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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 04-16-2004, 04:35 PM
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Location: http://dirtawaycleaning.com
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http://dirtawaycleaning.com
let me know what you think about it.

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Old 04-16-2004, 10:47 PM
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"The best" has no context, hence no meaning for customers. Best price, fastest cleaning, highest satisfaction rating on three quality factors customers care about most?

Without context this sounds like boasting.

The banner needs to be improved, professional looking logo needs to be added. I don't make a point of mentioning logos, but the banner on this needs a makeover.

"All the cleaning capabilities of a truckmounted Unit with the convenience of a portable." This means something for the people operating the equipment, and nothing to customers. And if ADD should be Ad or Advertisement.

In all the site lacks content. It has typing, but these are not customer benefits. What is listed does not even qualify as features, simply statements. The site needs graphic work, copy, a marketing makeover, a tagline which makes a meaninful promise, and so on. It requires someone spent two minutes looking at competitive sites for this type service.
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Old 04-17-2004, 09:41 AM
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Default Re: want to visit my site.?

Hi

I checked out your site and the layout is great..
colours are very nicely put together...

Two things I noticed...1> Business Oportunity...is mispelled...
2> where are you located... Did I miss that ???

other than that it's looking great...

Have a Great Day :)
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