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Old 09-03-2009, 05:41 PM
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The primary goal is to make money with adsense.

Readers have to scroll down past the testimonials to get to the tip (no tip on that page)

Right below the tip is a link to my book sales page (Paydotcom sales page)

Any suggestions?

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Old 09-04-2009, 10:17 AM
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Default Re: Any suggestions for improving this page?

Sorry Rick but it doesn't really do anything for me I'm afraid. There is no real design to the page to comment on.

You should maybe think about moving away from a table layout and look at implementing a CSS structure instead. If you don't have much experience in web design why don't you look at using a template of some sort, you could get a very simple good looking design up and running pretty quickly.

I also find it a little patronising of you to give me permission to print the page...... ?

Just my two cents worth

Good luck
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Old 09-04-2009, 10:42 AM
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Default Re: Any suggestions for improving this page?

If you're hoping to make money with Adsense and you want to do it as inexpensively as possible, then why not at least consider using a design template? The minimalistic design currently in place won't generate more than a mere pittance.

People don't want to read the text on your page to figure out what the page or site is about and I'm sure they'd be much more responsive to a page or site that induces a higher degree of visual interest.

As it stands, the page is not conducive to more than a few seconds of viewing, too boring and textual for it to be of any significant interest en masse.

Consider a redesign. Present the information in an attractive manner and you might improve your revenue. Do nothing and you'll get nothing.

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It looks like Made For Adsense site.
I think you need to work hard on the design aspect.
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Default Re: Any suggestions for improving this page?

Rick, I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree. The page does nothing to grab my attention, and everything to chase me off. It desperately needs some design effort. There are templates available that will get you a lot more results than you can hope for, as it presently stands. If you don't have the necessary expertise, or the budget to contract a professional, I think that might be your next best approach.

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