Please review www.djdirect.biz

djdirect · #1 (**permalink**) 06-14-2009, 09:50 AM

All comments welcome, you can also find us by Googling 'Mobile DJ Directory'

Thanks

Jim
DJdirect

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 06-14-2009, 11:53 AM

Don't like:
1. Lavender colour scheme. It is too weak.
2. .biz TLD. I personally think you should use a .co.uk SLD.TLD
3. Three grammatical errors in a single sentence: ...christmas partys, anniversarys, and childrens partys. You need to hire a native English speaker (writer).
4. Lack of contact info. I just don't trust you.

amxfan · #3 (**permalink**) 06-14-2009, 10:30 PM

After you fix what Dave pointed out you may also want to look at the following.

1. The first line of your code is "<HTML>" This should be your !DocType.
2. If possible remove the styles and java to an external .css and .js file.
3. Search engine friendly / user friendly URL's would be a nice change.
4. You may want to add a 301 to www.djdirect.biz/ from http://www.djdirect.biz/index.php and also make your sitemap reflect the change.

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