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Old 06-12-2009, 02:20 AM
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Default Please review my site www.protection4all.com

My wife recently re-did my website International Health Insurance I personally like the layout, just don't know if I like the "product pages". I just don't know what I don't like about them. Any comments suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

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Brian-

The only negatives I note are the yellow text on green background, which makes it a little harder on the eyes, and a missing image on your Contact Us page.

You might consider opening up your text a little on the Privacy Policy page. Even some bold font on the sub-headings would help.

Otherwise, it looks pretty good to me.
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Thanks Doc, I fixed the image on the contact us page, and will fix your other two concerns over the weekend. I do appreciate you looking at this for me.

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Default Re: Please review my site www.protection4all.com

The website 'wastes' space in the upper right hand corner. In that portion of the website you have the logo and specifically the 'globe' element. The globe makes sense in the context of international health coverage, BUT think about all of the things you could be doing there:

1. You could have your phone number
2. You could put a 'tagline' (for instance 'Affordable Worldwide Health Coverage for Travellers')

In IE, your website's first page isn't actually that large, as a matter of fact its very close to being completely on the page (very little vertical scroll), its SO close to being a 'no scroll' website that perhaps you should consider making the logo element vertically smaller. That is one thing to consider.

Another thing to consider is the free travel alerts and deals which is an element that I like on the website, however, its placement on the website is PROMINENT! First page no less. You MIGHT want to put that over on the right margin, narrow the column for the 'body text' and put something over in the left column a little more related to selling your product. Of course by doing that the page will most likely get longer.
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1. "Printable Brochure and Application
If you would like an Travel Medical Insurance brochure mailed to you,"


No, no.
Get them to fill our a form (that way you capture info) and email the PDF to them.

2. I much prefer the color scheme at http://www.hthtravelinsurance.com/pr...personalized=y
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Default Re: Please review my site www.protection4all.com

There is black text in the dark blue area on this page Missionary Health Insurance It makes it look like black hat seo, though I doubt this was intended as the other pages look ok. The privacy policy needs work and the contact page is a 404.
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The contact page opened alright for me, Jaca (FF)
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Yah it works fine now Doc
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Default Re: Please review my site www.protection4all.com

When you offer PDF for download, make sure it opens in new window:
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"With HTH Worldwide you can use the Global Navigator Plan
Download the brochure to learn more about this plan. The brochure lists benefits, rates, application and health questionnaire. Everything you need to get started is included in the brochure.
Contact us not working.
Don't understand why you have text on the blue background. Dark blue and black is impossible combination. Leave the background be just that, background. Have all information on the page.
Logo would help as well.

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