At A-Screen Repair we offer a wide variety of services that could be of help to you. We offer everything from complete rescreening of pool enclosures down to 1 panel repairs.

The text is not centered on the homepage.

It doesn't look very polished if I'm honest. There's mixed italics/non-italics in your strapline in the header. The photo in the header looks poor quality - I don't know what benefit the photo has actually, but maybe I'm missing something!

The list of benefits of using you on the homepage seem to mainly be the benefits of screens, not you. On the services (and other) pages your company name is mixed colours and the yellow is very hard to see, and the name partially underlined in an odd looking way.

There's no way I can see on the contact page to email you. There's loads of underlined text which look like they ought to be links, most aren't. I don't think the majoirty of the text being in italics makes it as easy to read as possible. There's quite a few gramatical errors like capital letters in the middle of sentences, apostrophes in the wrong places, and the text sizes varies quite a bit from page to page, which looks inconsistent.

I think it needs to be more consistently professional looking to attract customers. Sorry!

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I'm no art critic but you should reconsider the layout (navigation, how the text fits withing the page, the font size and color, etc.). At the moment it looks very amateurish. Sorry, don't take it personal.

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Seems the page was put up in a hurry. I believe your site needs to be revamped a little and it should be more representative of the products and services you provide. Perhaps I can give you a hand. I have several projects I'm working on now, but would love to give you a hand.
examples of my work:

Welcome to CJH Property Services Inc .com -- A Home Remodeling Company
Diehl & Associates, Inc. -- Specializing in HUD/FHA Mortgage Training Seminars Since 1983
Heathy Products Plus -- eStore

...just to name a few.

You might want to consider having the links to your other pages on the left so that the text does not run all the way across the page. It is the same as newspapers having columns rather than their stories running across the whole page. You have a couple of grammatical errors as well. Is there a reason why the "A" in A-Screen Repair is yellow? It is difficult to see on some of the pages. The photo should better show how great a screen enclosure you can build. The photo at the top doesn't do that. You also have some grammatical errors. And, don't forget you need to update the number of years in business every year.

The quote about the guys in the red trucks is hardly noticeable. Consider changing the color or moving it away from the image of the building at the top. Also, the top section of the page is too big which is making the background start to repeat, which does not look good.

As others have pointed out the site needs some work. Make sure you fix your grammatical/spelling errors.

You have three phone numbers listed. For visitors it would help to know why there are three numbers. If each number has a particular purpose that should be stated.

I also think you should consider moving the BBB logo you have on the home page. You might want to consider incorporating it into the header of your page. Where it is now seems kind of out of place.

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