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Old 02-11-2009, 08:38 AM
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Talking On-Page SEO Review of this site required

Hi all... it'd be great if you could review / critique this site for me from an On=Page SEO point of view. The site is: www.yellow.co.nz

I'd like your thoughts on what you think is flawed from an SEO perspective when it comes to the On-Page SEO aspects of this site.

These guys (yellow.co.nz) are a new client of mine and I'm appalled at some of the fundamental SEO mistakes and / or ommissions on this site.

Without getting "too deep and meaningful", put your on-page SEO skills to work for a few minutes and post your observations, thoughts (including the ugly ones) here in this thread.

What could be done to radical IMPROVE the On-Page SEO aspects of the site? Your suggestions are welcome


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Old 02-11-2009, 09:05 AM
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Sorry to baffle you, Tubby. It's after 2.am down here in New Zealand so forgive me if my "thread topic" is somewhat confusing to you and others in here.

I'm simply looking for a site review (and I should have said so in the first place) but purely from an SEO perspective. I have now edited the heading and content to reflect what I am after in a clearer way.

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Default Re: On-Page SEO Review of this site required

smeatz, I was a little confused. I thought the thread was basically
"Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site?"

You have yet to do any work on the site?

you say "These guys (yellow.co.nz) are a new client of mine"

I expect you and they know why they employed you.

My initial thought was why review the site before you put it in order.

Members would be reviewing not your site . . but somebody else's work.

I am in Australia. (almost neighbors)
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Default Re: On-Page SEO Review of this site required

Maybe you should do your SEO improvements first since they are a new client of yours and then we will review your work.
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Old 02-11-2009, 01:56 PM
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Default Re: On-Page SEO Review of this site required

heh so you're like asking what to do with their website eh?

Anyway, here's what I noticed on the source code of the website:
Code:
<head><title>YELLOW™ New Zealand: Business Search with NZ Maps</title> 
<meta name="description" content="New Zealand Business Search with YELLOW™. Business Listings with full NZ Maps and Directions." />
<meta name="keywords" content="New Zealand, NZ, Maps, Yellow, business, search, Accommodation, Automotive, Boats  &  Marine , Broadcasting, Buildings, Business Services, Children, Clothing  &  Fabric, Community, Computers, Dentists, Doctors, Education  &  Training, Electrical, Entertainment, Farming, Finance, Hairdressers, Health Beaut" />
Compare the metatags from yellowpages.com
Code:
<head>
    <title>Yellow Pages Local Directory - YELLOWPAGES.COM</title>
    <meta name="Description" content="Find online Yellow Pages business listings, phone numbers, addresses, maps, driving directions and more in the YELLOWPAGES.COM online directory." />
    <meta name="Keywords" content="yellow pages, directory, local, search, business listings, phone numbers, maps, driving directions, white pages, user reviews, ratings, internet yellow pages, yellowpages, telephone numbers" />

& yellowbook.com
Code:
<HEAD>
<TITLE>Yellow Pages and Phone Book Services at yellowbook.com, Find Local Businesses at Yellow Book</TITLE>
<META name="description" content="Find local businesses at YellowBook.com! Yellow Book is the leading source for free online yellow pages.">
<META name="keywords" content="yellow pages, yellow book, yellowpages, phonebook, Yellowbook.com">

The keywords used on yellow.co.nz seemed to be off with what the site used to offer. Don't used the category searches as keywords. They won't help you get rank on your target audience. Thus, make the descriptions and keywords more customized and related to New Zealand.
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Old 02-13-2009, 06:14 AM
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Default Re: On-Page SEO Review of this site required

alt text missing from images
lack of H2,H3 tags etc
just a few things at a glance
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