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Old 01-21-2009, 10:03 PM
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Smile Hemp Shop Earth Moon Beam Beaded Cat - Dog Collars, Leashes Please review

This is a new hemp shop. Site sells custom handmade handcrafted hemp jewelry and accessories. More closely hemp necklaces, hemp chokers, hemp anklets, hemp bracelets, hemp belts, hemp wallet chains, hemp dog collars, hemp cat collars, hemp dog leashes, beaded collars, beaded leashes with use of semi-precious earth stones / gem stones.
Everything is made custom to order and is personalized. Ongoing changes are being made to improve the site.

Please review the following site:
w w w . earthmoonbeam . c o m


Emphasis on: Design, Seo, Is it Eye Catching, Content, Navigation
All kind suggestions are welcome! Thank You!
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Old 01-28-2009, 12:54 PM
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Default Re: Hemp Shop Earth Moon Beam Beaded Cat - Dog Collars, Leashes Please review

1. Dump the Courier font. This is not the place for an ugly monospaced font.

2. Add postal, physical, phone contact info. Otherwise I don't trust you and won't do business with you.

3. Need better photos of the products. The collar I looked at was overwhelmed by the background. Get a professional to take your product shots.
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Default Re: Hemp Shop Earth Moon Beam Beaded Cat - Dog Collars, Leashes Please review

In Explorer 7.0, your top menu is partially hidden by the purple section. I'm viewing with 1024 x 768 resolution.
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Any suggestions on a better font to use, then the existing one?
I was looking for standard web fonts I can use with HTML that all web browsers
can load. Something that will set my site apart then the regular type font.

The top bar menu, yes I know, I changed the layout and kept the top bar menu,
as the result with the different sizing, and background change, its hidden now. I
plan on giving it a span of background color soon.

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Originally Posted by EarthMoonBeam View Post
This is a new hemp shop. Site sells custom handmade handcrafted hemp jewelry and accessories. More closely hemp necklaces, hemp chokers, hemp anklets, hemp bracelets, hemp belts, hemp wallet chains, hemp dog collars, hemp cat collars, hemp dog leashes, beaded collars, beaded leashes with use of semi-precious earth stones / gem stones.
Everything is made custom to order and is personalized. Ongoing changes are being made to improve the site.

Please review the following site:
w w w . earthmoonbeam . c o m


Emphasis on: Design, Seo, Is it Eye Catching, Content, Navigation
All kind suggestions are welcome! Thank You!
Your site needs on-page and off-page optimization.First you need to concentrate on on page to have a good content and site navigation.Then you can look forward for SEO which will definitely help you drive traffic.Just get connected to an internet service provider.
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Old 01-30-2009, 07:28 PM
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Default Re: Hemp Shop Earth Moon Beam Beaded Cat - Dog Collars, Leashes Please review

Your font choices are extremely limited.
See Common fonts to all versions of Windows & Mac equivalents (Browser safe fonts) - Web design tips & tricks

1. You have to accommodate both Windows and Mac OS X users.
2. You can only rely on default fonts. Just because I have a $1900 Helvetica set does not mean that everyone does.
3. The font needs to be appropriate for the business. For example, a tool & die company would never use Comic Sans as it says they are not serious.
4. The font must be easily read on a computer screen. Some fonts (e.g., Times Roman) were designed for paper and are not as well suited for the lower resolution quality of people's monitors.

So, your font choices are limited to the intersection of the four sets above.
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Default Re: Hemp Shop Earth Moon Beam Beaded Cat - Dog Collars, Leashes Please review

I find the cream text on purple background hard to read. Fonts? Your CSS stylesheet specifies this:

body {
font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;
}

Which is a great choice. BUT, you are overriding this by specifying Courier in the HTML.

<font color="#FFFFCC" face="Courier" size="5"><b>Earth Moon Beam Contact Form</b></font>

Take that code out, and it will look much better. You should always specify your fonts in the style sheet, and keep style coding out of the HTML.
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