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Old 03-16-2004, 05:41 PM
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Would you book flights, accommodation or tours on my site. What can I do to omprove my sales. Your input would be greatly appreciated.
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Wessel

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Old 03-16-2004, 05:44 PM
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I cant see what site u have developed .Maybe you can send a link to the same.
Jay
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Old 03-16-2004, 05:46 PM
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Thnx
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Old 03-16-2004, 05:50 PM
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Ummm.. redesign it dude. It looks like one of those generated pop up windows. Text too small. Site.. pretty cluttered and plain. Scrolling way too much.

You got a lot of good pics and content you could use..you just need to reorganize it with a better navigation and some kind of structure to the content. check out. http://www.priceline.com See how they have organized all those vacation spots and promo deals into sections. Also check out their menu and see how they have simplified what someone can do on the site.

my 2 cents.
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Old 03-16-2004, 05:56 PM
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Appreciate your input. Thank you.
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Old 03-19-2004, 02:59 PM
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I think your site needs a good navigation menu .It might help to have individual pages for each topic, thus reducing the need to scroll.Or separate your sections in a better manner.Also you might want to remove the flourescent green color used for some fonts, its a bit hard on the eyes.
Jay
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Old 03-19-2004, 05:12 PM
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I agree, will start as soon as possible. Thank you for replying.
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Wessel
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