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Old 12-11-2008, 03:46 AM
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Default how do you think about my site?

how do you think of my site? you can log onto www.chanceol.com. your comments will be cherished.
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Old 12-11-2008, 10:55 AM
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Default Re: how do you think about my site?

It's a basic template site which lacks an intuitive navigation system. Overall, I find the site rather unimpressive. You're going to have to work a lot harder if you're hoping to establish the site as a premier International business directory.

I'm sure you fully understand the purpose of the site but you're having difficulty getting your message across in a clear and concise manner.

Check your meta tags, your meta description is missing.

Your Terms of Use, Contact Us, Privacy Policy and About Us pages would benefit from some additional formatting to make them more readable. Basic bolding in headings/subheadings and more space between paragraphs and list items would be helpful.

Clicking the "Reciprocal Link" in the page footer spawns a new window (or new tab).

Clicking the "Yes! ChanceOL" graphic at the top left of each page doesn't return the user to your home page. It's what users expect, so you might want to change that.

"Buyer Free Register"
"Supplier Free Register"
"Forget Password"

The links in the header represent poor translations to Engrish. You might consider changing those to read:

"Free Registration for Buyers"
"Free Registration for Sellers"
"Password Reminder"

Overall, the textual content is poorly translated. You'd do well to find someone fluent in English to translate the text for you.

The "Contact Us" page would benefit greatly from an integrated web form.
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Old 12-12-2008, 01:48 AM
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Default Re: how do you think about my site?

thanks for your comment. i find it useful. as my site is newly-founded and i am not a native english speaker, so there are some problems on my site. you have just mentioned that the textual content of my site is poorly translated, do you mean that all the contents ( including about ChanceOL) are poorly translated or just some heads and sub-heads because i translate some of them. i wish you give me your valuable suggestions.
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Old 12-12-2008, 08:16 PM
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Default Re: how do you think about my site?

The translation is askew throughout, even on the About page. For a lot of business people, in these unsteady economic times, will have second thoughts regarding the word "Chance" in the company name. It just implies unnecessary risk or an international procurement company.
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Old 12-12-2008, 08:44 PM
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Default Re: Need to work more

I found the English unacceptable for business site, text should break logically and instead been fixed width you should use percentage so it always fits the given size. Scroll bar is not good idea. Also in your supplier links, there are no pictures or they are under wrong headings. Get someone from English background to help you with language. Like the concept, great idea. Hope you succeed.

Paul
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Old 12-13-2008, 06:51 AM
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Default Re: how do you think about my site?

One could find interpretation for any site, so the language barrier is not a problem for me. I do have difficulty in finding what is offered to the visitor, nay, prospective client. Some people are shallow and need video stimulus; others are very perceptive and need little more than a few spoken words. I sense that you would prefer the latter and are well equipped to communicate at that level. Perhaps you should.

There's no need to cloud the field of vision. An idea and an expression can explode before your eyes. Leave room for judgment.
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