Hi

I would really appreciate a review of four pages I have written on a new Roulette System. I used to sell this as an eBook and recently decided I couldn’t be bothered selling & posting the CDs anymore and that actually it might make some good original content for my site.

The start page is: Best Roulette System FREE - How to win at roulette

I'd appreciate feedback on:
1. Style of writing / general credibility
2. Navigation between the four pages that describe the system
3. Overall impression / Pain points etc.

Just to clarify I am asking for a review of these four pages in particular, rather than the whole site in general.

Many thanks

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1. I am probably not your audience, but for style and credibility, this kind of quote helps finalize the decision to consider this one more "so if it's so amazing and secret, why are you giving it away instead of quietly raking in a billion a year casino-hopping?" and I would leave:

2. The orange navigation gets lost, I would enlarge and place it in line with your rather text-heavy copy if you want people to hit the next step. Specifically, it needs to be at the end of your per-page copy.

3. Right side, black on deep blue is hard to read. I would again (as a visitor) rather scoff at "The above offers are time limited. We are unfortunately not able to extend them as they are provided by our partners" - if anything, could briefly note the standard "Limited Time Offer!" and call it good.

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Chiron - Many thanks for the great tips. I've made those changes as suggested. Not sure what to do about the text on the right. Ive made it white - but does it look any better?

Thanks

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I think it all looks very nice and professional and is easy to navigate. I really don't believe any of those things really work, but as far as the site design goes I think you did a nice job.

Thanks all.

I've now applied all the changes suggested. The difficult part now is to get traffic.

My content is good. It is unique (I wrote it) and it will genuinely help people - so how do I best get the word out and get visitors?

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