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Old 08-14-2008, 05:46 PM
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Hi there,
Please review my site Magickal and Spiritual Solutions, Products, Tarot and Psychic Readings, from MonaMagick.com

I would like to know what you all think of it. Why you would visit, why you would come back to visit and why you would not revisit.

I started this site off using tables and tried to convert to css and only templates but it's being a trying process of replacing the pages etc.

What do you feel I should change? What should I keep? It would be interesting to know as this isn't a topic for everyone when it comes to astrology, horoscopes and the occult. I have run out of ideas to be one of the top ten as I am not in a syndicated newspaper like many of the astorlogers because I cover everything else including astrology.

Thanks in advance,
Mona Magick
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Old 08-15-2008, 07:04 AM
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Not a bad site but to be honest it looks like a Xcart site that was changed very little.
SEO friendly URL's would really help as well.

When I was looking though your site I got lost!!!. I clicked "Merchandise" and started looking though your products "As I'm familiar with this product line" but once I entered the catalog I was stuck. I clicked the logo but it did not take me back to the "root" of the site. Once I found the tiny link labeled "top" I did make it back to the home page.

The images of your products need work as some of them "mostly jewelry" where blurred and did not show detail. while images in other categories did not really fit in due to their background color in the image or the image size itself. To be honest it looked like you took stock images from Azure Green and used them without resizing anything. This was your biggest issue to me as I browsed your site.

You need more consistency on your site as some of your products are laid out in rows and columns while others are in one single column.

I would turn off "Fast Lane Checkout" and also uncheck "Disable anonymous checkout". This will let your visitors checkout without creating an account and it will also remove the "I am a new customer" and "I am a returning customer" boxes "if it is a x-cart site". A lot of people do not want to take the time to register if they do not buy that type of product often.

Images in your bestsellers list would have been nice.

You need a accept more then just PayPal and Nochex.


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Old 08-15-2008, 11:55 AM
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Thank you very much for your review!! and I can tell that you know the product. I haven't had time to really develop the cart as much as I'd like...it's actually Oscommerce.

The actual website I built from scratch and using editors from time to time. If you can, let me know what you think of that as well. Do you have a site that you know works well in everyway?

Many Thanks
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Old 08-15-2008, 07:09 PM
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Hi,

I would like that you let some information dropdown also for recources and contact....as all the other have some information "dropping down" nothing happens with recources and contact and it let the visitor with the impression this link does not work. even if its repeats recources and contact only it would help. Your website is very low tech but at the same time people who want your service are not looking for gimmicks. So generally, the site is okay but a few things should be changed.

I wish you good look mona

all the best

rudi
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Old 08-15-2008, 07:19 PM
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Thank you, I appreciate it.

However, in response to your comment it's well taken. I had decided to not use a pull down only because one would scroll down forever... I agree with you though it should be like the rest of the links.
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Old 08-15-2008, 11:52 PM
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I thought the homepage image of the woman was too fuzzy. I kept trying to focus my eyes and then gave up.
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