still working on it, but would like some feedback. thanks. Indianapolis Website and Logo Design by Gralmy

I don't care for it.

For me, these are negatives:

1. Black Times Roman text on gray background is very difficult to read. That text is also too small.
2. Domains for sale! What does this have to do with your web design business? Almost worthless names.
3. McCainMcSucks.com. Yikes. You just pissed off at least 46% of your Indiana prospects.
4. I inferred (or you implied) that you designed the Setstr and Make Me a Driver logos. Given that I find other examples on the web, it appears to me that you entered these in a logo design contest. Did you win?
4. It appears that you have exactly 2 websites that you have designed and that are up and running.
a. I looked at the Designed II Appeal website and I see that all the description and keyword meta tags are the same on every page. Not good for SEO.
b. The Contact Us/Me link does not lead to a form as it should, but merely pops up my email program as it should not.

I think you need to start all over.

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As usual, nice comments, Dave.

I'm not really sure what is going on with that large lower case 'g'

Where's the phone number? (If I go to the site, like what I see, how is this thing generating a lead for you?)

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Yes, also good advise. Business should be, at least facially, apolitical. You have every right to do it of course!

I tend to think English should be the official language. On one of my sites, I have translated Spanish product descriptions because at the end of the day green is green. Republicans' money is good too.

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On the right hand side, the text "This logo was deigned for an artist..." is overlaying the graphic in an unappealing way in Safari. Also, you've got to be kidding with the phrase "Keep in mind when viewing examples of my work that the colors, fonts, logos, etc. are not necessarily what I would have chosen for the project." All design is a compromise, and saying this just means that you are criticizing your clients.

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