The Gathering - Review

GCypher · #1 (**permalink**) 07-09-2008, 04:53 PM

Hi all,
Its finished (Almost just few things to finish) and is in the "air" and LIVE, so plz make a visit and give your feedback plz, would be appreciated, negative/positive comments are welcome 2

The Gatheing

Enjoy
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davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 07-09-2008, 05:08 PM

Light blue empty space at top is a waste of very valuable real estate.

The contrast between the text and the background needs to be increased. (Personally, I hate black backgrounds, but I understand why you have it here.)

The leading in the text needs to be increased. Leading between paragraphs needs to be increased.

You should use an external style sheet.

Homepage is cluttered and way too busy for me.

Dubbya · #3 (**permalink**) 07-09-2008, 05:14 PM

Background is too dark. The text is too hard to read, I hate that.

Page title needs work. It's not using any keywords and could be much more effective if it did.

CSS stylesheet should linked externally. The site would be easier to update and page load times would decrease.

Missing <h1> and <h2> headings.

GCypher · #4 (**permalink**) 07-10-2008, 09:47 AM

Just took the portal off just the forum for now

Thanks both for the comments

The Gathering

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