Hello everyone,

Please review my site. I am curious about your opinion, what improvements should I make to it... or any other suggestions.

3in7 + Dream Team Formula = Best GDI Downline Builder

Thank you in advance,

Kind regards,
Izabella

Ugly.
Site does not appear to be trustworthy.
You need to start over from scratch.

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Thanks... could you be a little more explicit? What is that you do not like? Why is it ugly?

Not trustworthy? Please explain it to me.

Regards,
Izabella

I concur.

Unless users already know what GDI is before they get there, the site is of no value whatsoever. Basically, they'll want to know what the heck a "Downline", why they need a "Downline Builder" and why should I trust you to help them? What have you done to qualify you as a reliable source of information and expertise?

You've got 10 seconds for users to determine what the site is about, decide if it's worth staying and to click further into the site to find out more. As it stands, the home page fails to accomplish any of those goals.

If you want users to stick around, start off by explaining what GDI is and what they can do with it, then show them how your expertise can help visitors use it to their advantage.

Do not assume that your users know anything about GDI or "downline building". Write content that is compelling, interesting and informative. Use real life examples and legitimate testimonials to encourage your potential participants to click deeper.

You have no real content, you have no logical navigation system and you've put some useful content in the column on the left side of the page where users anticipate your navigation menu would be.

You have a list of topics and headings but no paragraph text explaining anything of value.

Link directory? Forums?? Where's your "Contact Us" page???

You need an About Us" page, policies, terms of use pages.

Not surprisingly, Dave is right on the mark. The entire site concept is poorly conceived and the page layouts are too simplistic to hold a user's attention. As it stands, you're wasting your time if you're relying on this as a marketing tool.

You need to start over.

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I love Dubbya's comments.

I wrote 15 words. Way to few as I am a lazy bastard.
He/She wrote 292 words. Articulate. Spot on. Instructive.

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I agree with Dave and Dubbya.

Were to start to improve, square one.

I found myself reminiscing of the days when the internet was young and few people knew how to design websites. People were throwing anything up just to create a web presence.

I was a little suprised not to see a hit counter or Bravenet goodies.

Oh, how I miss my Trellix and Tripod.

Don't get discouraged though. You just need to catch up with the design of the times.

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I saw one website with all different kinds of design templates. It’s a stock photography site but has vector art and illustrations. Just use those keywords to narrow your search, and then use the great visual search tools to quickly find what you want.


You can check it out at Search Stock Photography - Image Recognition Technology for Stock Images, Vector Illustrations, Flash Files, and Videos at Xcavator.net

Its look ok ...

But you need to optimize if u need a gud result ...

byee

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