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Old 10-09-2003, 11:54 AM
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Default One Page AT A Time - webpages.charter.net/onepageatatime/

This is the first and only site I have ever had! Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! As soon as I can get to a scanner, I plan to post some of the letters that I have gotten from the places I send to just to let people know that this is not a con. Please tell me what you think about it!!!!!!

BE HONEST!!!!!!

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Thank you in advance.


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Old 10-09-2003, 02:33 PM
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Default I like what you have going so far

You've got a great start on your site - Very Nice!

I think that it could use a more interesting page layout, maybe add some more photos and a Logo wouldn't be a bad idea either.

Your navigation could use some help as well. Your site was kind-of hard to navigate through since you only have three main links.

Let me know if you need any help!
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Old 10-09-2003, 05:11 PM
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It sounds like a great service but I would add a lot more text about yourself and business on the home page design a really nice logo and the picture on the home page is fuzzy.
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Old 10-10-2003, 09:55 AM
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I'm trying to correct that about the pics. At the time, that was all I could find. My sister has some pics of Austin (the one who has cancer) and is going to send me some to put on my page. I wasn't sure if I should put info about me or not, so I appreciate you telling me this. I answers my question. Any more comments are appreciated!
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Old 10-15-2003, 01:56 PM
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Default Re: One Page AT A Time - webpages.charter.net/onepageatatime

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This is the first and only site I have ever had! Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! As soon as I can get to a scanner, I plan to post some of the letters that I have gotten from the places I send to just to let people know that this is not a con. Please tell me what you think about it!!!!!!

BE HONEST!!!!!!

To get there

http://webpages.charter.net/onepageatatime/

Thank you in advance.


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This site is now sporting a new look. Altered Impressions recently donated the re-design of Olivia's entire site.
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Old 10-15-2003, 02:17 PM
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It really is worth going to. Karen really did a wonderful job on it. Check it out.
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Old 10-18-2003, 04:05 AM
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Default new link and testimonies page

I just put an extra page that has letter from some of the agencies I send to, do you think that will help get the message that this is not a con? I also got a children's hospital to let me put a link to them on my page. Will that help or hurt?
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Old 10-27-2003, 09:17 AM
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Site completely redone since this started. Give comments, suggestion, anything helpful.
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