Re: LandbridgeToys.com - need feedback
My first impression of the site is blah. I do not mean that to be harsh, but to be honest.
* It is a toy site full of fun, games and playtime...Your site does not reflect that. The large gray area on the top and right side mixed with the dull green and black text just makes you feel blah, like a cold rainy day.
* I did not find your navigation on the left side useful at all. The shop by category really did not help (example: architecture, decorative, gift card). I didn't even know gift cards were a toy. Your shop by manufacturer was even less helpful as in I have never heard of many of them.
* The overall page layout and navigation I feel could have been better. The search box looks like it was an afterthought. The links at the very top of the page look like an afterthought.
* Your page suffers severely for lack of content. Pictures may be worth a thousand words, but search engines cannot read pictures and your pictures did not welcome me in and invite me to stay and look around.
* When an item is added to cart, there is an alignment issue with the text when viewed in FireFox. I did not check it with any other browser.
* This is a pet peeve of mine, for I hate this. You have to create a login and password and set up an account in order to purchase anything from your site. I personally find this annoying to say the least.
* You have done more than most with your Contact Us page by actually having physical address, phone number, hours of operation, but I would add a form that can be filled out and submitted for general questions.
* On your about us page, you start out with "We’re Graham’s mom and dad"...should I know this person? I do not see the relevance of putting this in.
* It would be nice to see some sort of better business bureau seal, hacker safe seal, or some sort of security badge.
* Your title, keywords and description need to be rethought. "Shop By Category Shop By Age Shop By Brand" are those the keywords you want to rank for?
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