check it out and let me know what you think cos I aint been doing this for long! but please be honest,
http://sharingdoodles.250free.com

Also if you would like to swap links let me know.



cheers and hope to have a reply soon!
cheers Doodles

<edited to comply with review Rules #1 and #5 http://www.webproworld.com/viewtopic.php?t=47>

... it took me 2 seconds to reach for the close button, but since you wanted a review I stayed on for 60 seconds to try to figure out how to get in.

Question #1: What is your site about?
Question #2: What are you offering to someone coming to your site? Is this a personal home page or something along that line?

Overall: Needs work. No color scheme to comment on. No content (at least not that I could find). Next to impossible to navigate. Needs formating, structure and organization .. once you have some content.

Note: You might want to consider using a blog for what I think you are trying to do. There's a good free one at www.blogger.com

did you click the box at the bottom cos it is a flash menu and my site is based around xbox live

when you go to my homepage it tells you about it! I have approx 15 pages to my site!

Take in mind this is my first site!
check it out again and let me know cos i will take your input seriously.

cheers Doodles

p.s
I checked out you site and just got to say fairplay it's a cool layout and structure

First off, fair play to you for having a crack at a flash site. Making flash work well is difficult even for the professionals.

On 800x600 you can't see the flash portion of your site at all. Ideally it needs to be moved under the banner at the top.

You give instructions as to how visitors should use your site but you should make it plainly obvious as soon as they arrive, websurfers forget how to read sometimes and will only scan a page, if they can't find what they're looking for they'll be off.

I agree with Track on his two main points, what is it about?? Again it needs to be obvious.

Have a good look around these forums to get some ideas. Stick with it, you've only just started ;)

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