www.averybiomedical.com

kenaron · #1 (**permalink**) 03-10-2008, 09:38 AM

Hi all,

I've been lurking around this site for the better part of two years, and have recently uploaded a new version of our corporate website. I'd appreciate any feedback!

Breathing Pacemakers, Diaphragm Pacing, Phrenic Nerve Stimulator, Custom Electrode Fabrication | Avery Biomedical Devices, Inc.

Ken

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 03-10-2008, 11:52 AM

Ken,

1. Title is too long as Google only displays the first 66 characters.

2. Homepage: remove gry space top so as to get more above the fold. Shrink the font size of the body text.

3. You need to have a meta description tag.

4. Shrink heading sizes in style sheet. It appears that you are using default sizes and they are too large.

5. Need some more images. Way more. And, use custom photos, not stock.

,dave

kenaron · #3 (**permalink**) 03-11-2008, 10:04 AM

Thanks for the feedback...most of the images are our own, what is the issue with stock photos, and what impact does that have?

davebarnes · #4 (**permalink**) 03-11-2008, 10:20 AM

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Originally Posted by kenaron

Thanks for the feedback...most of the images are our own, what is the issue with stock photos, and what impact does that have?

Stock photos tend to look like stock photos. Custom photos, in my opinion, have a much greater impact on the visitor. Because, they don't look like stock photos.