pls review my website www.uugold.cn

hyzjb · #1 (**permalink**) 02-25-2008, 09:53 PM

Name of Site/Business: uugold freebies

Site's Main Purpose: Information

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Additional Comments/Notes
i've started a new site called freebies |free stuff|free host|free music|free domain|free games|free samples for freebies ,free stuff etc.
Could you give me some feedback or suggestion. Thanks very much!

amxfan · #2 (**permalink**) 02-25-2008, 10:20 PM

* Your title is too long and keyword stuffed.
* You have too many keywords and they are stuffed.
* Your description is too long and it is also stuffed.
* You may want to read Google ad-sense rules.

May not encourage users to click the Google ads by using phrases such as "click the ads," "support us," "visit these links," or other similar language
May not direct user attention to the ads via arrows or other graphical gimmicks
May not place misleading images alongside individual ads

* Change your copyright from 2007-2008

Your site lack trustworthiness and 'Looks' like a site one would get a virus from.

Move your ad-sense ads to the side or bottom "After you read the rules" and get rid of that 'Congrats you just won flashy thing'.

That's my honest opinion.

hyzjb · #3 (**permalink**) 02-25-2008, 10:30 PM

thanks amxfan,ill accept ur opinion and edit it immediately

amxfan · #4 (**permalink**) 02-25-2008, 10:39 PM

Wish everyone could take criticism of their site like you just did, being good or bad.

Thanks

davebarnes · #5 (**permalink**) 02-25-2008, 11:44 PM

Quote:

Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

No.

It is not very attractive.
Tons of empty white space.

hyzjb · #6 (**permalink**) 02-26-2008, 12:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by davebarnes

No.

It is not very attractive.
Tons of empty white space.

thanks!

DoneInStyle · #7 (**permalink**) 02-26-2008, 08:27 PM

There is no clear purpose stated here, other than some tiny links up top with the word "Free". Part of it was the distraction of all that colorful blinking stuff, which I found mildly annoying. The other part is in the design. You need to put your PURPOSE front and center above the fold. Like a Mission Statement. Give people a reason to click into the site.

zhexiang · #8 (**permalink**) 02-27-2008, 01:17 AM

dot cn....

and i thought it's in chinese, but in english...

nvm...

hyzjb · #9 (**permalink**) 02-27-2008, 02:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by amxfan

Wish everyone could take criticism of their site like you just did, being good or bad.

Thanks

thanks for your suggestion!

Quote:

Originally Posted by zhexiang

dot cn....

and i thought it's in chinese, but in english...

nvm...

tomlom · #10 (**permalink**) 03-03-2008, 09:09 AM

I'm afraid the beeping treasure-giveaways.com ad makes me want to flee from your site

SisterSledge · #11 (**permalink**) 03-11-2008, 02:52 PM

Have you changed the site since others commented? It looks pretty good to me, visually (I like the colors/icons/layout)...the few flashy things are below the fold and not intrusive. I'd expect to see a bit of that sort of thing on a site promoting "free stuff".

There is too much whitespace but I'm guessing these spaces will fill up with links when you have more content.

The image of the guy at top left looks squished.

Need more content on the homepage before I'd be tempted to explore deeper.