Please anyone can review my website DOBERMAN PINSCHER PUPPY GUIDE

My actual doberman (pictures on website) will have puppies next month, I will have to add more photos and article.

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1. Get rid of the "protected by Copyscape".
a. It is annoying and insulting.
b. It does not work.

2. I like the overall look.

3. I don't care for the diagonal stripes in the background. My eyes had focus problems with them.

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Dave Barnes
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First... you need to move your AdSense ads somewhere else... it's the first place people look, and no one goes to a website looking for advertisements. Try moving them below your welcome paragraph. (On second look... stick to the theme of your interior pages for your Google Ads. That placement is fine.)

While I also don't like your color scheme, what bothers my eyes most is the light-pastel green text for your headers. These need to be darker (or just another color). With so much of that color on the screen, I don't know that they're important. They're also hard to read if your screen's contrast isn't set high.

Don't use CAPTIAL letters in your Title Tags. It's rather annoying.

I do like that your source code is very clean. I don't know if you used a template of some kind or not, but it's very easy to scan. Good use of CSS positioning too, by the way.

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Art
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as well as what the others have said, i think some of the content could possibly be regarded as a bit spammy? DOBERMAN PINSCHER HEALTH for example.

I personally would look at rewriting the text to read more naturally, you dont need to say "doberman pincher" in every single sentence, make it more natural for your readers. 17 repeats of the phrase in a small body of the text is a bit excessive IMO

the last 2 paragraphs of the health page linked above are particularly bad for this and almost read like a machine generated page specifically to put adwords onto. ..i only really looked at that page and the home page, but would apply this approach to the whole site if I were you.

content written like this shuts me off immediately as a user, so even if ther SEs didnt penalise you for spamming keywords a lot of the visitors may not like what they find when they get there.

i love the puppy pics though (even tho i'm a rottie man myself)

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The Site took 55 seconds to load in my browser on cable modem and apparently that was before you put in pictures. If I wasn't looking at the site for review, I'd have backed out twenty seconds before it loaded.

The lime green just doesn't seem "Doggy" to me.

Your first paragraph is keyword stuffed.

Your English in your second paragraph is poor.

You spelled remarkable wrong in your third paragraph.

Your information is sketchy and poorly organized. I imagine I'd find out better information and more of it at the AKC website. If you're trying to build enough authority to get visitors to buy your books or even click on your Adsense, you're missing the mark.

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Your download and order links don't work--I assume they will later (I also assume your links page will have some links later as well).

Lots of pronoun-antecedent problems, e. g., "the Doberman pinscher is much more than what Hollywood makes them appear to be."

The lime green - light gray color scheme is a bit uncomfortable to these tired old eyes.

The last two photos on your photos page (with the dog tied) are not reassuring to a prospective Doberman owner.

^cosign

The template doesn't fit your topic and your background is an eye sore.