WebProWorld Part of WebProNews.com
Page One Link To Us Edit Profile Private Messages Archives FAQ RSS Feeds  
 

Go Back   WebProWorld > Site Design > Submit Your Site For Review
Subscribe to the Newsletter FREE!


Register FAQ Members List Calendar Arcade Chatbox Mark Forums Read

Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 11-19-2007, 09:28 AM
WebProWorld Member
 

Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 61
matheen RepRank 0
Default My New Site for Steel Products

Hello Everybody

Please review my new site INOX ARABIA

:: Inox Arabia ::

Right now its on sub domain, so please suggest or pass any commnets to develop/improve this site, before uplaoding on its own domain.

Thanks All

Matheen
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 11-19-2007, 12:18 PM
ran_dizolph's Avatar
WebProWorld Veteran
 

Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Windsor, ON
Posts: 483
ran_dizolph RepRank 1
Default Re: My New Site for Steel Products

Looking behind the scenes, I think you could easily get rid of a load of javascript for the menu by simply replacing it with a CSS unordered list-based menu. You can achieve much of the same effect, without the bulky javascript.

And while on the topic of the menu, replace the artifact-y jpegs with some decent quality gifs.

As soon as each page loads, there's a loud squeaky kind of noise. I don't really know what that is, but it's annoying.

You should rethink the page titles as well...you could be a lot more descriptive in them.

That's about all I've got for now...hope it helps!
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 11-19-2007, 12:29 PM
mjtaylor's Avatar
Moderator
WebProWorld Moderator
 

Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Florida Keys/Western NC
Posts: 1,789
mjtaylor RepRank 3mjtaylor RepRank 3
Default Re: My New Site for Steel Products

Agreed on the page-load squeaky squawk ...

Nice looking site; lots of content - more than I want to know about steel, but it would appear to be a content rich site ...

The taglines on the logo are not legible ...

Bibliografy? Should that be with a 'ph' for the 'f'? The file name is spelled with a 'ph' ....

Title tag need SEO ... and the language of the description tag on the home page is stilted. Elsewhere metas are empty ... you will want some text navigation for SEO ...

Perhaps you will resubmit the site when you have gotten further with SEO ...

Cheers, MJ
__________________
M.-J. Taylor
SEO Web Design by Cyber Key Search Smart DesignŽ SEO Copywriter & Traveling Vacation Gypsy
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 11-19-2007, 04:18 PM
WebProWorld New Member
 

Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Reading, PA
Posts: 13
EliteAF RepRank 0
Default Re: My New Site for Steel Products

Reads like translated English

First Paragraph, though it may be descriptive for your purposes, is all about you.

Second Paragraph has interesting information - about what you do for the customer - good. Develop that and then work down from there in order of what a customer would be interested in knowing.
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 11-19-2007, 07:56 PM
WebProWorld Member
 

Join Date: May 2007
Location: Sydney - Australia
Posts: 31
paul_foss RepRank 1
Default Re: My New Site for Steel Products

Very well presented. One gripe I have found. When you go to Downloads and click on some topic, instead getting new window the page goes to Acrobat. You loose lot of people this way, make sure the links open in new window. Wish not to comment on the other things, others have done so. Perhaps one more thing, which country you from? Maybe you could include that. Not all vistors would be familiar with the name of town.
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 11-21-2007, 04:09 AM
WebProWorld Member
 

Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Buena Vista VA
Posts: 52
tomlom RepRank 0
Default Re: My New Site for Steel Products

Personally, I am annoyed and distracted by the image slideshow at the top on every page. Can you at least provide a way to stop it?
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 11-21-2007, 08:01 AM
WebProWorld Member
 

Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 61
matheen RepRank 0
Default Re: My New Site for Steel Products

really good suggestions, from my expert friends, about sound, SEO tags from MJ

i wil consider all of your points to improve my site.


Thnks all

cheers,
Matheen
Reply With Quote
Reply

  WebProWorld > Site Design > Submit Your Site For Review


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Glowing Steel Ring WPW_Feedbot Graphics & Design Discussion Forum 0 08-19-2005 11:30 AM
Cool Steel WPW_Feedbot Graphics & Design Discussion Forum 0 06-21-2005 07:06 AM
3D Steel Text WPW_Feedbot Graphics & Design Discussion Forum 0 04-05-2005 11:30 AM
Stainless Steel Text WPW_Feedbot Graphics & Design Discussion Forum 0 01-15-2005 12:30 AM
Steel Chain WPW_Feedbot Graphics & Design Discussion Forum 0 12-15-2004 03:30 AM


Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.2.0