Best Out Of You

ashwani · #1 (**permalink**) 10-28-2007, 07:27 AM

pls. review my site : Achieving Best out of You : By Ashwani Kumar for content and structure(layout).
with regards,
ashwani
india

**mjtaylor** · #2 (**permalink**) 10-28-2007, 11:17 AM

Your site is in English, but your English isn't quite fluent, but rather stilted, ... you are missing articles and you do have some typos. What is your target audience? You need to speak in the same voice.

For example, in the Queen's English it should read 'Achieving the best out of you ...and colloquially, 'out of' you is an unusual way to put it, it would probably sound more natural as 'from' you ... but again, I am not sure about your target audience. If you're targeting the US you need to sound "American" etc.

Also, your audience must be quite young, as your typeface is tiny and requires sharp eyes.

Your About the Site page fails to tell me what the site is about ...

Your Learn from The Best menu item looks odd

LEARN FROM THE

BEST

You might want to figure out a way to keep BEST on the same line ... and then PERSONAL DEVELOPMENT is dropped onto another line ... can't tell that that's even part of the menu ...

Best wishes,
MJ

davebarnes · #3 (**permalink**) 10-28-2007, 11:59 AM

Your content does not appear to be original.